This was a very effective analytical essay. I believe this is an improvement on your previous work, so take pride in this result. Clearly the time spent on essay structure has stuck. That is a strength of this essay. This was very nearly a B+.….Few errors in your work along with some effective vocabulary did strengthen your work. You clearly demonstrated an understanding of media bias and critical literacy concepts.
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